Classmate Review: "Media Review" by Yamini

I thought that Yamini's media critique of WHAS11 was very good and to the point, which is how you should format news articles. All of the points she makes about the news story "Carmel, Ind. named one of America's best cities-again" I can completely agree with. The story does not have local relevance nor does it have newsworthiness on its side. The only part of this critique that needs fixing is that Yamini accidentally used "peripheral" and "core" synonymously when in truth they mean totally opposite things but in the end it was clear that it was just a miscommunication and the message she was trying to get across did come through.  There is also a link to her article below.

Yamini's Media Critique